A Parable For Our Time (Poetry Monthly)


By luigi_pagano
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She took a shortcut through the woods
looking glamorous in her new red attire.
Although told not to stray from the path
she was driven by a burgeoning desire.
High heels, miniskirt: she felt grown up;
knew she was pretty, desirable even.
She’d been told many times by this boy
she’d met on the net, called Stephen.
Not easy to walk in those tall shoes
but she hurried; didn’t want to be late.
The dream would soon be a reality:
before long she’d meet her new mate.
He had sent her a text and a ‘selfie’.
He looked gorgeous, with sensual lips,
dark big eyes and a perfect physique;
it would definitely be worth the trip.
Ignored was the parents’ advice
about paedophiles and grooming;
plus the press forever crying wolf,
warning that danger was looming.
Alarm bells began to ring loudly
when a man, whose looks were shifty,
came towards her at the station;
his age was approximately fifty.
But luck was on her side this time
and the next thing that she saw
was the pervert being taken away,
caught by the long arm of the law.
© Luigi Pagano 2015
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Is this for poetry monthly,
Is this for poetry monthly, Luigi? It's a long time since I've read a rhyming piece with such a serious message. It has your light touch but a killer moral. It's a super poem. You've made a modern Red Riding Hood with all the old conventions intact.
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A modern take well executed -
A modern take well executed - with a clear warning of today's dangers. Enjoyed this well done!
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Story well worked into this
Story well worked into this rhyming poem, and interestingly brought up to date.
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Well worked, Luigi. Straight
Well worked, Luigi. Straight-forwardness of reading can be very profound, and the positive ending emphasises that there can be such, despite, but underlines the very real warning. Rhiannon
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Very clever and topical for
Very clever and topical for our time.
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Exciting and fresh
Nice update, lots of current details and clever rhyms. It wasa fun read Ray
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