Your own kind

Cherry

By love_writing

Wed, 10 Jun 2015
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10 comments
 

You could tell she was a young thing

springy legs and all that;

curious, confident, didn’t give a damn

 

I shooed her with my scarf

then an empty plastic bag-

she gave me the eye- back off

Green eyes to green eyes

 

She’ll have him, I thought-

he’s not used to others

won’t know how to handle himself.

 

Yet I saw something in his eye;

  I’ve got this

  I know what to do

  I don’t need you to fight my battles

 

So I flip flopped off

down stone stairs

leaving you

to your own kind.

 

 

Certificate U
Poem
Nature

Comments

Submitted by socialeaf on

 Really enjoyed this. Love the communication with eyes and how the 'kind' is left for the reader to puzzle. Nice one!

 

Submitted by love_writing on

Thanks for that social leaf- glad you liked it :) 

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Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

I will also wonder about the kind. Do put us out of our misery!

 

Submitted by love_writing on

Haha...that would be telling!! 

Thanks too to the cherry picker :)

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Submitted by Philip Sidney on

There's a story in here, you've got me gripped.

Submitted by love_writing on

Thanks Philip...glad it kept you gripped! 

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Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

Me too - great mystery poem. I thought perhaps it was a frog. I probably sound stupid now huh.

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Submitted by love_writing on

Thank you for reading! Guess I should let the cat out of the bag....oophs I just did :) 

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Submitted by haze on

hello lovewriting,

enjoyed reading your poem -

it's very original and lightly put across - and has a nice sense of humour which made me smile.

good luck with the writing......h

Submitted by love_writing on

Thank you so much! Glad you liked it...yes something a bit lighter than my usual!

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