Summer's End

By D Marie

Sun, 05 Jul 2015
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By evening all heads are turned west

for a golden kiss goodnight,

the clouds are streaked

with coppery pinks

as the sun begins to sink

into her own light.

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Submitted by london_calling79 on

What a perfectly described sunset. Gorgeous.

 

Submitted by D Marie on

Thankyou london-calling, your comment has cheered me up.

 

Submitted by Bee on

Lovely.

Bee

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Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Enjoyed sharing the word-picture. Rhiannon

 

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Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Sorry, meant my sharing your picture! Rhiannon

 

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Submitted by Rhiannonw on

I don't think I've ever got in such a tangle before with words!! I meant from the first that I liked your composition (word-picture) and I enjoyed your sharing it with me! I do need to look at the ambiguity of what I say! Rhiannon

 

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