Balls

Nice form and funny!

I did find the last line breaking the rhythm, I think it felt natural to emphasise 'way' rather than 'sure'. Maybe that's just me, I did get how to fit the rhythm, with a bit of thought. If you wanted to change it, something like 'is quite sure to make hair turn to grey' might pick up the rhythm better, but there again, as I said, maybe it wouldnt to someone else! Rhiannon