Brief Eclipse Of Time
By loquaciousicity
Mon, 03 Aug 2015
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Life begins and ends
birth, joy, laugh, cry, death and dust
brief eclipse of time
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Very true, but hopefully
Very true, but hopefully there is a bit of stuff to pad it out a bit in the middle. Your poem and philosophy is brief and to the point.
Bee
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A different style to your
A different style to your usual!
Funnily enough I've had this verse I've been tweaking from time to time viewing life as a circle, linking sleepyness of infancy and decline, with a window of opportunity between (like what Bee said above), so in a way I wondered about the last line, seeing it as 'eclipse of brief time', but maybe that is what you were thinking - the brevity of life time which gets soon eclipsed? Rhiannon
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