Cloudy Word-play (IP)
By Rhiannonw
Fri, 31 Aug 2012
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Wandering in cloud-cuckoo land,
buzzing, on cloud 9,
head in the clouds, with visions grand
assuming all is fine;
but someone clouds the issue,
your eyes cloud over, frown,
on the horizon a cloud appears,
you’re under a cloud, pushed down,
accused of being lazy;
thoughts grounded focus, busy,
(see, every cloud has a silver lining!):
once more your fingers hit the keys,
computing muddles facing,
and gladly use facilities
of new cloud storage leasing.
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Great play on words
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Great play on words Rhiannon,
really liked this.
Jenny.
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I agree with Jenny,
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
I agree with Jenny, Rhiannon...clever indeed;-)
Tina
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Hi Rhiannon
Hi Rhiannon
This is very clever, how you take all those "cloud" phrases and interweave them to make sense.
Jean
Jean Day
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