In Tune

Cherry

By skinner_jennifer

Thu, 13 Aug 2015
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15 comments
 

As morning breaks on a new day dawning,

rain pours cradling puddles in open cracks;

dew forming on blades of lush grass...while

spider spins a song full of gossamer dreams,

 

with no concept of my presence

busy on its journey as it weaves,

silently progressing...each strand

a thread of nature's sweet melody.

 

Your complex movements inspiring

so whimsical in motion...resemble

the dance of the seven veils...or

the flames from a burning fire,

 

as drops of rain cascading...pluck

at your delicate harp of fine yarn,

gracing your work with their pearls

of wisdom; achieving perfect harmony.

 

 

 

 

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Comments

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you for the reminder that there is beauty to see on a wet morning, or cool dewy one. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Bee on

I love the way you've transformed the visual into music. Beautiful images in this piece, Jenny. Love it.

Bee

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

Wonderful, wonderful, Jenny.

Tina

 

Submitted by a102866 on

A spider plucking its web strings. I like it. No less, to the rhythms of the falling rain. No fools here. A nice little yarn you have spun!

Submitted by jeand on

Hi Jenny

What a beautiful poem. I love it.

Jean

Jean Day

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Rhiannon,

you're so right, there is so much beauty to be seen on a wet or dewy morning, in fact the rain is pouring down as I write.

I'm so glad I could remind you of nature's magic and thank you so much for letting me know.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Bee,

I was just thinking that even though we can't hear it, there is silent music to be found in nature's wonder. It always amazes me how a spider manages to weave such a perfect web, the concentration and effort that goes into creating, astounds me. 

Many thanks for reading and your words.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Good morning Tina,

I'm so happy that you liked my poem. Many thanks for reading and appreciate you letting me know.

Enjoy your day.

Jenny. smiley 

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

I'm very grateful to you for reading,102866, and Oh! How that spider weaves, glad I could spin a yarn for you.

Many thanks.

Jenny.  smiley

 

 

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Good morning Jean,

Isn't nature wonderful? I'm delighted you enjoyed reading and very grateful for the feedback.

Thank you so much.

Jenny.  smiley

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Many thanks for the cherries Editors, they always make my day.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by J.L.Hamilton on

It flows so well and so reading it becomes effortless and more energies can be spent seeing the images in your mind. Wonderful work. I imagined the spider represents a person close to the observer. Someone who goes about their day oblivious to even your existence but so beautiful at it you cannot help but still find it enduring.

Jeremy Hamilton

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hello Jeremy,

what a wonderful interpretation of my poem, I so love that idea that it's based on a person known.

Your words were truely inspiring. Thank you so much for reading and telling me your thoughts.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by rayjones on

So easy to miss the astounding yet simple beauty all around us, clearly you didn't, delightful poem.

Ray

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi ray,

I have to admit that I've always been inspired by nature and it's many gifts. I'm so glad you enjoyed reading and many thanks for letting me know.

Jenny. smiley