Meditation

Cherry

By skinner_jennifer

Sat, 29 Aug 2015
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13 comments
 

Fingers lightly touching

melting into fleshy skin,

an adventurer exploring

locating warmth within,

 

every corner of this essence

going deeper to the core,

discovering what's buried

in the depths of my soul,

 

soft dreams scan the mind,

drifting through cells where

secrets lie...every breath lifts

this heart, I'm sustained...

 

holding longer to each inhalation,

then letting go, as difficulties are

dispelled...like leaves in Autumn

are scattered and taken by the wind.

 

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Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

beautifully described Jenny!

 

Submitted by Bee on

This is such a beautiful meditation, Jenny. The breaths, the letting go like leaves in autumn. I'm going to use this one. It's wonderful. And so is the picture. 

Bee

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

Jenny - totally speechless.  Just to say, wonderful.

Tina

 

Submitted by love_writing on

'letting go as difficulties are dispelled'  beautiful, that and the poem as a whole - it flows. 

love_writing

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

I'm so pleased you enjoyed this poem insert and appreciate the comment greatly. Also many, many thanks for the cherries.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Bee,

just the thought that this poem might help you has more than made my day, I hope you manage to get relief from it. Appreciate hearing your thoughts and many thanks.

Jenny. 

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Tina,

you know it's always good to hear from you and read your comments, of which I'm always grateful for. Thank you they mean a lot.

Hope you're having a peaceful Sunday.

 

Jenny.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi there love_writing,

glad you liked this poem, I find meditation so rewarding and it's good to know I could put into words how I feel and readers know where I'm coming from.

Many thanks for taking the time to read and comment...much appreciated.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Bear,

you are so right about the breathing, it's amazing how uplifting it can make you feel.

Glad you enjoyed reading my poem and many thanks for letting me know.

Jenny.

 

 

Submitted by jeand on

Hi Jenny

It really is a beautiful poem, and I too love the idea of exhaling all those autumn leaves.

Jean

Jean Day

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Jean,

many thanks for your kind comment, just love those autumn leaves and walking in the forest.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by rayjones on

Soft dreamy flow,quite transporting the reader to a better place, wonderful wording each word seemed to tell its own story, beautiful Ray

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi ray,

I just love that you found this poem to have a soft dreamy flow. That's a perfect comment.

Many thanks.

Jenny. smiley