Standing Forms
By Philip Sidney
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The city is a collage of standing forms, abstract
from a distance
up close, each shape has
purpose, narrative, name
I turn from the window to face the room
a meditation in grey, quiet
but for the whirring of poison pumping into bluish veins
assassins sent after killer cells
and us, chattering as though we were in the launderette
with no mother to tell us hush
Later we walk through an arrangement
of Hepworth’s life, simplified for easy digestion
a version of events and works with small cards that point
toward an end, as though that really could be the case
the curator narrator reshaping, retelling, whittling away at
her life
shapes carved from wood and stone resemble parts taken
from a body, the remains of something that was once whole
now set apart for close scrutiny, some are strung across, a memory
of connective tissue, tendons, tension, taut with energy
that a clean sharp slash of blade
would release
she made a series of sketches of surgical procedures
the words say
anyone can see that these masked and gowned figures
are sculptors in their ceremonial robes
practising the solemn art
remaking, reforming
We walk in the afternoon light, tinted with autumn
you show me your head
smooth and brown as polished wood
your eyes alive and laughing, beautiful
we dance beneath Emeline’s statue
our shadows long and girlish, the past clings
in the tunnel we lean against each other
spectral bodies flash past
we are still there
standing forms.
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Comments
Neat writing with a wonderful
Neat writing with a wonderful assonance and great use of alliteration, melding art with memorable experience, all beautifully drawn together at the end. Very much admired
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Statues and sculptures seem
Statues and sculptures seem to freeze still moments. I had to look up about Hepworth. Rhiannon
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Wonderful use of pauses and
Wonderful use of pauses and breath in this piece. I often notice the spaces in your poetry more so than other people's work. You leave room for contemplation and time and stillness.
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lovely, stands alone and in
lovely, stands alone and in company equally well.
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Beautifully portrayed, Philip
Beautifully portrayed, Philip. Felt I was there.
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First class, Helen. Luigi x
First class, Helen.
Luigi x
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