Silence in my heart

By cassiegoeswild

Sat, 24 Oct 2015
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8 comments
 

Where I was filled with

laughter and childish chatter -

a joyful noise.

 

Gentle chimes of love,

the background for melodies

and the rythms of day -

 

silenced.

 

Dull quiet - to highlight

the sounds of passing cars

and the splattering rain.

 

I miss the music.

Certificate U
Poem
Surreal

Comments

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

This is very effective. The early part and the contrast.

If it is how you are feeling now, I would say, Seek out that music of heart again! Personally, of course,  I would pray, and read God's love letter (the Bible) to me when feeling like that.

Maybe taking an interest in some who are friendless around you might bring that musical laughter again?? Rhiannon

 

Submitted by cassiegoeswild on

Thank you - I will think about what you said. 

Cass

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

I agree with Rhiannon. Lovely advice. Reaching out to help others will fill your heart with music I'm sure.  

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Submitted by VeraClark on

Oh, makes the heart ache. Hope voices and music lift this narrator again soon. Spare and very affecting.

 

Submitted by Bee on

The sudden end works well. Listen out for the music, it's still there. 

Bee

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

simple but says everything needed - well done

 

Submitted by Philip Sidney on

Effective contrast, leaves a reflective, melancholic echo.

Submitted by cassiegoeswild on

Thank you everyone for your kind words.

Cass