The Flame (Poetry Monthly)
By loquaciousicity
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PROLOGUE
The Flame, aflicker, licks and flays,
illuming evening’s negligees
With braided curls she swirls and sways,
and flits and floats in light ballets
APOLOGUE
A Flame, to conquer creeping fog,
flew dancing towards a random log
Her flight perplexed a leery frog
beside a silent somber bog
The Flame, a ripple, all alone
alit on leaves where birds had flown
The aching twigs began to moan
A rising breeze began to groan
The Flame arrayed an ancient oak
with torrid tongues and veils of smoke
A beaver bailed, the dam had broke
The leery frog soon ceased to croak
The Flame uncoiled and lashed midair,
consuming crowns with utmost care
A crazed coyote fled her lair,
left in the lurch bewildered bear
The Flame, unfurled, went wild and grew,
enkindled cats and caribou
Remaining... not a residue,
as reeking vapors bade adieu
The Flame revealed her strength unshackled
Flora, fauna crisped and crackled
Fire Witches clucked and cackled
One more forest stripped, then hackled
EPILOGUE
The arsonists were well aware
the Flame would travel everywhere
The weirs are gone, the land is bare,
and soon you’ll find a city there
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From the beauty of a single
From the beauty of a single flame to so much destruction where the most destructive of all gets, deservedly, the least mention in this wonderfully descriptive poem. I absolutely loved the opening line, the sounds in the first stanza, and images throughout danced brilliantly in my mind. It starts out (almost) as if it could be for children, which makes the ending all more stark. Definitely one to be read aloud. Could you put it in poetry monthly?
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The last verse is very
The last verse is very telling, of the destruction so easily caused, and an interesting note that it could lead to city building. Wasn't sure why 'weirs' in the last but one line. Rhiannon
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Terry, I'm with Bee,
Terry, I'm with Bee, completely, on this one.
Amazing poem; the personification of fire executed in a deliciously hideous fashion.
Wonderful
Tina
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An excellent poem, Terry, and
An excellent poem, Terry, and I can see, as it was suggested, that it could be a performance piece.
I can sympathise with you regarding a recording as I am in the same situation, lack of proper equipment and an inability to recite.
Best, Luigi
P.S. Is a 'T' missing at the beginning?
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