missed you again!
By cassiegoeswild
Wed, 09 Dec 2015
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I walked past the place
you said that you would be.
I just wanted a glimpse of you,
I didn't want you to see me.
I strolled past once or twice,
tried to act nonchalantly...
but I didn't get to see your lovely face.
I decided to walk in the dark
and get a cup of tea.
Thought that I would wait awhile
since I was wandering free,
but I was a little afraid of the dark
and of who I might see...
I hurried with back a fierce, contentious walk.
So now I'm sat at home
with a sad look upon my face,
I have tears in my eyes
my shoulders slumped without much grace.
I missed you once again,
I can't seem to catch a break...
without you I just feel so all alone.
You are my shining star,
you are my rainbow in the sky,
I can't believe I'm that lucky
that you'd like to be my guy.
I wish that we could be together
from morning until night...
it's sad that we always seem so far apart.
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I wish I could but I am
Permalink Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on
I wish I could but I am rubbish at writing music too.
The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.
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I can't write the music... yet I know
that every line has to scan across the same in syllable count in each verse for it to be put to music successfully, the same with your chorus, I write hymns etc from time to time...
So you need to check each line so that each verse scans exactly the same.
it works fine as a poem btw. as is.
maisie Guess what? I'm still alive!
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