Mother, mirror, daughter

Cherry

By love_writing

Sat, 09 Jan 2016
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6 comments
 

 

Hurts

everyday

conversation,

half the time- yes no

whilst staring at the T.V

hardly ever eats her dinner

everything is left at her backside-

but she’s not putting effort into anything

it doesn’t help me get better, I love her too but

I just don’t know how to help her anymore can you- 

 

 

I just don’t know how to help her anymore can you-

it doesn’t help me get better, I love her too but

she’s not putting effort into anything

everything is left at her backside

hardly ever eats her dinner

while staring at the T.V.

half the time- yes no

conversation,

everyday

Hurts.

 

 

 

 

 

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Comments

Submitted by celticman on

it all adds up. 

 

Submitted by love_writing on

Thank you Celticman...and thank you to the cherry picker, I'm most grateful

 

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Submitted by airyfairy on

Identified very much with this, and loved the structure.  A very thoughtful piece.

Submitted by love_writing on

Thank you airy fairy - really great to hear what you liked and makes me feel a little less alone that you identified with it :) 

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Submitted by Stephen Thom on

this was really effective. people work in patterns huh? so it's easy to fall into patterns and feed off/mirror the people around you emotionally. structure was neatly done and brings out the content v well. hope you're well! :)

 

Submitted by love_writing on

'it's easy to fall into patterns feed off/ mirror the people around you emotionally' That explains so well what I was trying to say Stephen- thanks for 'getting' it! And thanks for commenting, hope you are well too!

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