Calling time

By Hal 2104

Fri, 04 Mar 2016

4 comments

CALLING TIME

I am lost
(said the cross stopwatch),

Lost my mind
on a sharp inkline,

My temper's tossed
in a frost embossed,

For all time
in a love that's blind.

Permalink Submitted by Hal 2104 on Fri, 2016-03-04 23:20

first it was incline, then inkline but seperated out to ink line.

Oh, how I ponder.

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Permalink Submitted by Hal 2104 on Fri, 2016-03-04 23:23

S'pose the syllables match no matter but visually - question is the significance of the pun that was absent before.

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Permalink Submitted by Philip Sidney on Sat, 2016-03-05 08:35

I like inkline as one word, more obvious word play then.

Permalink Submitted by Hal 2104 on Sat, 2016-03-05 09:28

Yeah. On reflection ...

I was always bad at multiple choice.

HAL 2104