Life Lessens
By Bee
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Seems like yesterday
you caught me by the wrist
in the school hall.
But you only laughed
as my fist uncurled
my treasure -
Back-eyed White, stolen
from the science lab -
Please Sir, I saved her?
You allowed escape
on that occasion, let me
off without detention,
but I permitted myself to be recaptured
a couple of years later - an experiment,
but we were inseparable -
till all of a sudden, you released me
again.
I accepted it at the time,
but later learnt how you'd succumbed
to a terrible malignancy -
just like my Stolen Treasure - gone.
And I'm afraid life might be
far too long under
unfavorable circumstances.
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Hi Bee
Hi Bee
What's black-eyed white? I was thinking kitten, but you would hardly have that in a science lab. And the usual frogs don't seem to fit - but maybe a white mouse.
But of course your poem is about much more than that, and it is very lovely.#
Jean
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it gets very ambiguous
it gets very ambiguous towards the end (in good way) doesnt it. Double meanings essential and very well put to use.
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Great, precise memories which
Great, precise memories which open out to that lovely ambiguous ending.
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Can only ditto what's been
Can only ditto what's been already said, Bee. An intriguing piece of writing.
Tina
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Something magical and elusive
Something magical and elusive about this, Bee. Events in the schoolyard stay with us. In different ways.
Parson Thru
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