Chanter - (poetry monthly)
By EB
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tripping all
about the blackened lake the manic
trees and spears
of grass with frossy heads
you send me
every morning walking
beasts with smiling teeth and me
dug deep in silted beds rescued
by a wild redeath
while you you slap my frozen hand
and drag my still unwilling spirit
from a mote of famished maggots to the bridge
a palm against my folding shoulder's
child I trust in
mirrored skies while with a smoked out
voice a-choke I sob and plead
I only have a ceiling and the sharp reminders
of the changeless view you send
me darkened days of creeping through the deep
unseeing trees the spears
of grass that stab the frossy heads
the beasts with dripping teeth and me
dug deep in silted beds a persevering hand
back at the edge of sanity's
cold steely eyes a visor on the mirror skies
that shimmer high below my closing ceiling
flashbacks of the lake inspire deep
desired sightlessness of trees spears aloft
the angry grass still dances
tossed white frossy heads
tripping all
about the blooded lake where Kitty lies
her mouth an O and clouded eyes
open wide forever
chanting
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There is something gothic and
There is something gothic and macabre growing bigger here as you read, the merge of frozen nature and frozen child (perhaps child, I dont know) You create a stark tableau.Great use of repetition, I think this is beautiful.
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This chilling poem with
This chilling poem with wonderful use of repetition is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day!
Get a great reading recommendation most days
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Accolades well deserved, EB.
Accolades well deserved, EB. You've done Poetry Monthly proud...and some.
Tina
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