roadkill
By fidud
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I didn’t see it coming.
A Toyota. Barcellona red metallic.
I spun from the glancing blow
a number of times. Graceful in a way.
And then
Hit the deck. As they say.
Shoulder first. No grace in that.
No elegance. The world is squint
and vapour. I wait.
And then
Two brothers come. Ah mates,
I want to say. Help me up would you.
Some cove in a Corolla. Hit and run.
But my beak is rammed somehow.
Nothing comes out. They squat
And strut and peer.
I feel the breeze lift my feathers
And then
Pain. A nip at first. A prod.
But it soon beefs up.
Mates, I want to cry.
Don’t do this to a brother.
But they’re too busy.
It’s like a massage
I try to think. Benevolent.
The benefit of the doubt.
Think positive.
But then
A pinch and I feel the tearing
Of flesh. Burning
In the tepid air.
They hop and hark. I don’t think
They’re here to help.
I close my eyes. The world
swims the same.
Another car comes. Peugot.
Twilight blue pearlescent.
The brothers fly. Like robbers
when the police show.
I hear my bones splinter as this one,
grinds me to the tarmac.
The coast clear, the brothers return.
I don’t feel it this time. A wing waves
In farewell salute and they feast
On me.
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It's a lark, this poetry, can
It's a lark, this poetry, can't say I know much about it, but I enjoyed your poem. It's a bird's life and all that.
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fidud, it seems to me you
fidud, it seems to me you have got your head around this poetry thing more than well. This is indeed a 'bird's eye view' with a difference.
Your individual style is refreshing...the subject matter, macabre, and the hard-hitting style you have utilised in the writing of this poem, serves, admirably in driving its point home. Like the aliteration in 'hop and hark', and the use of internal rhyming throughout is pleasing, culminating in a more than emotive ending.
Tina
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I really liked the angle you
I really liked the angle you took, enjoyed reading.
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Your description is spot on -
Your description is spot on - in particular 'the world is squint...' For my taste I think the poem is perhaps overlong. It meanders a little in the middle. Very strong start and end though. I liked the way the cars were specified.
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Horribly well-imagined. Very
Horribly well-imagined. Very good.
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