EBOLOWA 36

By simonmiller15

Sun, 10 Apr 2016
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36

 

A much revised version of EBOLOWA will be on sale in book shops and online at Unbound.com.

Details to follow as and when.

many thanks meantime to readers at ABC

and good luck.

simon

Certificate 18
Story
EBOLOWA
Historical Fiction
Drama
Crime

Comments

Submitted by simonmiller15 on

 

Submitted by Sandy Hogarth on

Yes, we need para one as a pause after the action and to remind reader. Lovely atmospheric rwriting paras 2-5.

I was surprised - Eilleen O'Connell. Good.

Your dialogue is really great.

Perhaps last para 'need' would be better than want. Stronger

Submitted by simonmiller15 on

Yes right as always Sandy thanks --- glad EOC surprised you -- I hadn't really planned it