THINKING AND HOPING
By moonphish
Sun, 19 Feb 2017
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she left me wrapped in wonder
with my tongue too stunned to speak
my eyes in starlit magic
till it made my knees go weak
.
this crazy hypnotism
left me in a spinning dance
my thoughts careening wildly
in a blood lust of romance
.
the sun always surrenders
to the whispers of the night
when you are thinking you are wrong
yet you are hoping you are right
.
she left me trapped in amber
in a certain time and space
where i had glimpsed the heavens
and i longed to stay in place
.
but time's not one's compadre
he just keeps on moving on
from glint of evening star
to the first fingers of the dawn
.
i tried to join her chorus
but it's such a foreign song
when you are thinking that you're right
yet you are hoping you are wrong
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Another cleverly worded poem
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Another cleverly worded poem from you Alvin.
Jenny.
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