9 the Broadway
By sean mcnulty
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Brooke couldn’t believe it. It was difficult to believe that she’d walked into a lamppost. That only happened in comedy fiction, and Brooke’s life was not comedy fiction.
When she arrived at rehearsals, she was asked about the bruise on her forehead. She was embarrassed about walking into the lamppost, but she couldn’t think of anything else to say on the spot. She explained the lamppost tale and everyone except Ryan laughed.
‘You weren’t struck by some brute?’ he asked.
‘No,’ she said. ‘I really did walk into a lamppost.
Ryan was always on the lookout for hints of domestic abuse among the younger girls in case he had to spring into action.
Brooke enjoyed Ryan’s protectiveness, but the truth of it was she had walked into a lamppost. Her life was not dramatic enough for domestic abuse.
Brooke’s life was not drama.
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I wasn't sure if this was
I wasn't sure if this was part of a series with the number in the title, but it seems to be a nice vignette. Reminds me of a short Raymond Carver. Really neatly encapsulated with enough context to drop you straight in. I like the final sentence. Story told - walk away. I've probably got this all wrong.
Parson Thru
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I once walked backwards into
I once walked backwards into a lampost whilst taking my then girlfriends goldfish for a walk. These things happen.
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This little piece has something special
I don't know what it is, but it's well written and flows very smoothly.
is this a thought or a part of something bigger or just an exercise? Like it
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