Addict

Gold cherry
Poem of the week

By ralph

Thu, 11 May 2017
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12 comments
 

'I’m a

thieving

lying

betraying

conniving

dirty

fucking

drug addict.

 

I’ll take my heart

rip it apart

wont care that

without it

I'll be reduced

to shards

and the shit

of a stinking

human being

that you should

not be seen

to have touched

or loved.

 

I am scum

I am rum

I am crack pipe

I am coke.

 

I am weed

I am speed

I am heroin

I’m a joke.

 

And I am broke.

And I am broken.

 

Don’t glance at me

Don’t smile at me

Don’t speak to me

Don’t acknowledge me.

 

Because

I may take

you

way

down

too.

 

You can

punish me

vanish me

rubbish me

embellish me.

 

Kick me

in the face

where once

you used to

cherish me.

 

I'm your banker

I'm your baker

I'm your teacher

I am undertaker.

 

I am your daughter

I'm your son

I'm the lost child

on the run.

 

I'm everywhere

if you care to look.

 

And to think I was

once just a bloke.

 

Who now is broken

Who is now broke.

 

All because

I’m a

thieving

lying

betraying

conniving

dirty

fucking

drug addict.

 

And I need

your help

please.

 

Help me!'

 

Please?'

 

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Comments

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

Brilliant. Even better as a performance piece I imagine. Thank you for posting it Ralph

 

Submitted by airyfairy on

This amazing, passionate, barnstorming performance piece is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day.  Please share/retweet if you've enjoyed it.

Submitted by airyfairy on

This is our Poem of the Week.  Congratulations!  A really outstanding piece of work.

Submitted by Jane Hyphen on

'I was once just a bloke', and a little boy too, born healthy. It's all so sad and this piece hammers it home for sure.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

A piece that said so much and spoke of the evils that are in our society.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by pencil_flake on

Makes you think. Makes you question. Makes you stop.

Great piece of work.

Submitted by celticman on

yes. I wonder how that would work if you replaced drug addict with Tory. I'm a thievin lying betrayin conniving fuckin Tory. Makes sense to me. 

 

Submitted by ralph on

Thank you for your kind words.

Erm. I don't think 'Tory' works for me.  It has nothing to do with the poem at all. I am a recovering cocaine and crack addict, the poem is about that, not party politics. 

Best,

Ralph

 

Submitted by celticman on

you're right Ralph. It's a honest poem and my prejudices against Tory propagnada doesn't work, but in no way demeans what you were saying. 

 

Submitted by seashore on

Brave, bold and true.

Submitted by scriptwriterm on

stunning, makes you pause while you read!

 

Submitted by Philip Sidney on

This is such a powerful piece, the self-loathing is heartbreaking.