Lost Forever...

By elz

Tue, 13 Jun 2017
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You ask me where I am,

 

And honestly I can’t say, 

 

For all that are lost,

 

Never find their way.

 

Though the night is dark,

 

And the fields are bleak, 

 

The wolves are calling;

 

I don’t know what they seek.

 

Hopelessness fills every inch of my soul,

 

Icicles falling, in the bitter cold.

 

You think I am strong,

 

But I know I am weak.

 

I cannot be found,

 

For I have no heartbeat.

 

 

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Comments

Submitted by Xhara on

Hi there, I like the directness of this poem, don't be afraid to add depth to titiles and try create a captivating setting for the reader throughout the poem. I think this provides context and that way the poem can be more relatable to the reader.

Xhara

Submitted by elz on

thanks!