Swimming In The Rain
By jolono
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That summer.
How can I describe that summer? The word “Perfect” seems appropriate.
I was thirteen and on holiday with my parents in a beat up old caravan owned by my Dads sister. Aunt Sheila.
Mum and Dad were going through a “bad patch”. A term used a lot in our family. I remember when I was seven staying with Nan and Granddad till things were “patched”. And after two weeks they came to pick me up and I heard Mum saying “It’s okay, everything is patched up now.”
I never liked the word “patch”. I associated it with bad things.
The Isle Of Sheppey sounded mysterious. I told my mates at school that I was spending the summer holidays on an Island in the middle of the Ocean. Only certain parts of that statement were true.
Sheppey was where the North Sea collided with the English Channel and Leysdown-On-Sea was where the water was bitter cold and dark brown in colour. But it was the sea, and sea needed to be swam in.
I swam in it every day. My teeth chattered and my body shivered but I had to go in. My swimming trunks were handed down from a cousin who’d outgrown them but were still too big for me and I spent most of my time trying to keep them up. I swam with one hand while the other held onto the trunks. I swam in circles.
One week was all we could afford. We didn’t have to pay for the Caravan of course but there were still expenses. Petrol there and back, a few drinks in the club house in the evenings and fish and chips for tea every night. And Dad gave me fifty pence every day for pocket money.
I went out at ten o’clock in the morning and came back in time for tea at six. I walked for miles during the day and tried to explore as much of the “Island” as I could. I found small bays where I caught crabs on a hand line and tried to sell them to the local shops for just a few pence. One day an old man bought seven and gave me his loose change. It was over one pound. I felt like a millionaire.
I swam in the shallows and dived for Oysters hoping to find Pearls. I found Cockles and Clams and even a small Dogfish, but no Oysters. It didn’t matter I was on holiday and that was good enough so I threw everything back into the murky water.
On the last day I was swimming far out. I was about fifty yards from the beach near our Caravan Park, I started to swim to shore. I saw two figures on the beach. It was Mum and Dad. I stopped and trod water. I saw them kiss and then embrace. It started to rain.
As I said. That summer was just perfect.
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You've caught so much there
You've caught so much there of lovely freedom to roam (sadly, sometimes dangers) for children, and the pleasure of such far greater than expensive tailored and warm holidays. And the realities of families 'patching up', and working through aggravations. Rhiannon
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Aw - that made me tear up.
Aw - that made me tear up. The Isle of Sheppey as a paradise, who would have thought?
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I have fond memories of the
I have fond memories of the bleak Isle of Sheppey too - but even if you don't know it you will have that 'ahh' moment when you read our facebook and twitter pick of the day! Do share if you like it too.
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I've never been to Sheppey,
I've never been to Sheppey, but man, 'there be pirates' or so I've heard... I definitely enjoyed reading this. I especially like the ends of your paragraphs. And the nicely end-focused sentences.
Thanks for reading. I am grateful for your time.
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This is lovely Joe. Firstly
This is lovely Joe. Firstly it's made me want to see the Isle of Sheppey (yes, it does sound ancient and romantic - as if you could construct some Arthurian-type legend around it). Secondly, with the 'patching up' you've perfectly captured the child's eye view of things. Thirdly, it has a brilliant ending! Well done and a very well deserved pick
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The story is incredibly realisic it's hard
The story is incredibly realistic it's hard to think it's fiction, except now for the water one would think it's too cold for swimming. Apart from that there are many details that feel so ordinary yet interesting.
Enjoyed the story! Tom Brown
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You've captured those
You've captured those childhood memories perfectly in this story Joe. I could just picture those small bays and a young boy searching for cockles, clams and dogfish. It bought back my own memories of searching for cockles in the mud as a youngster down in Cornwall.
The ending was just perfect too.
Jenny.
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Story of the Week
A near perfect piece of short fiction, and it's our Story of the Week. Congratulations!
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Sweet and wonderful, Joe.
Sweet and wonderful, Joe. Brought back memories of those summers on the Jersey shore. 12 to a bungalow. 3 to a bed and havin' the time of our lives. Big hug to ya, Joe. Hoping to see you next summer. Cheers.
Rich
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Nice one Joe
I like the way you created a genuine emotional resonance in something so brief. Nice piece of flash fiction.
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Still sounds exotic to me
Still sounds exotic to me jolono. Nice short.
Parson Thru
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Hello Joe,
Hello Joe,
Not lost your talent I see. Ooh, the mention of the Isle of Sheppey brought back memories of the only true holiday our family ever had. For us usually, what passed as a holiday was Hop Picking which I loved, particularly as I did very little; Great story beautifully told.
Moya x
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