Self Portrait
By WriterInTheDark
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You sit;
Brush your camera;
Canvas your lens.
You breathe;
In and out;
Sealed eyelids flickering.
You seek;
A scintillating view;
A beautiful thought.
You see,
You know,
You paint.
The delicate image in your luminous reverie.
Each stroke a new colour;
Universe;
Life.
You paint the white and black,
The all and nothing,
The light and dark.
The green, blue;
The grey.
So much grey;
So much shadow.
You paint the life and the death,
The hate and the love;
The cold and the heat.
They co-exist quietly;
Tiredly.
The paint,
The colours,
Rage war and peace.
Uniting and betraying;
Destroying and creating.
With a final caress;
It is finished;
But not complete.
You see a mirror;
A reflection.
Nothing more.
You enter the painting;
Let it capture you as a photographer captures glorious light.
The colours pulse,
Amidst your heartbeat.
You sit;
Brushes askew;
Canvas absolute;
Irrevocable.
It is you.
An explicit depiction;
Of you.
Grown like a child,
In your very own mind.
It is yourself.
Your whole self;
In a portrait.
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Comments
Hi there WriterInTheDark,
Hi there WriterInTheDark,
I like this poem very much being someone who's very much into the arts.
I think maybe there are too many punctuation marks, but I'm not really an expert so will leave it to the editors to read and comment.
Jenny.
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too many punctuation marks as
too many punctuation marks as Jenny says, but enough truth to shine through the Dark.
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Agree about there being too
Agree about there being too much punctuation, it disrupts the flow, but you take us right into the process of painting, the frenzy and then the contemplation of it. Very enjoyable.
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A creative rush! then wide
A creative rush! then wide eyed wonder...A very original poem that I like very much
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