If I
By Ewan
Tue, 17 Oct 2017
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If I look back,
a younger self is in my slipstream,
his eyes fixed on the road,
careful of mis-steps,
missing the flowers and the hedgerow.
I should call out,
a warning shout to be a tourist,
whose eyes flit and flicker
watchful for misses,
cleaving to wonders and the beauty.
I would not hear,
a younger self is ever righteous,
his eyes in and of the mirror,
spiteful in watching,
missing the lovers and their wisdom.
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Oh the advice we would give..
Permalink Submitted by Philip Sidney on
Oh the advice we would give...great concept.
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Such poetic words sum up a
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Such poetic words sum up a young childs view of the world perfectly.
Jenny.
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