Seasons

By Mary-Ann

Sat, 12 Aug 2017
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Autumn leaves
how familiar you seem
dancing to the tunes of the wind
gracefully you float
for all to be seen
your rich colour so beautiful and warm
yet you know
how to handle every windy storm

Quietly Winter steps in
another wonder
its beauty immaculate and clean
always remaining for those who has seen

Now there's a Spring in my step
in amazement soaring on an eagles wing
excitement is what you bring

In Summer it is the melodies
of praise that I sing
cascading and spiralling
in joyful rays
enjoying each season in different ways

Certificate 12
Poem

Comments

Submitted by celticman on

the seasons lead us and we follow on drfiting through time. 

 

Submitted by Tom Brown on

Beautiful verse! Reminds me of Narnia! The language is pure and has a clarity and happiness. It is interresting that you start with autumn and end with spring and summer.

You must be a born optimist! Tom

 

Submitted by Mary-Ann on

Thanks for the comment Tom ,I'm glad that it reminds you of Narnia.

M Storm

Submitted by Tom Brown on

I haven't actually been there. And indeed, autumn is just around the bend. My brother and me are going fishing soon I hope we catch something his time.

 

Submitted by Nolan on

No luck the fish weren't biting it could be the colder weather fish are cold blooded they become less active I think. Narnia was in permanent winter hey? It was the white witch that Aslan defeated.

But It was a nice day! Keep on trying! Nolan &&