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Gold cherry
Poem of the week

By alexwritings

Sun, 11 Mar 2018
  • 3352 reads
10 comments
 

 

Certificate PG
Poem
Other Fiction

Comments

Submitted by animan on

I really like this - very inventive, nice shfits of tone and context from the local and everyday to the visually imagistic, nicely slightly amused, intrigued, nice clever plays with language. I know exactly where this is emotionally. Impressive, if I may say so.

 

Submitted by alexwritings on

Thanks for the great feedback, animan! Really glad you enjoyed.

Alex

 

Submitted by airyfairy on

This beautifully crafted poem reaches out to the uncertaintly in all of us.  It's our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day!

Picture:  Creative Commons via Pixabay.

Submitted by london_calling79 on

Shifty and angular in equal proportion.

 

Submitted by Ray Schaufeld on

Bright sensuous description in grotty weather of it all getting that bit too good...

Submitted by Philip Sidney on

Fresh and lively, this poem makes the everyday glisten.

Submitted by Philip Sidney on

This our poem of the week, well done!

Submitted by alexwritings on

Wow thank you all very much commenters and editors! Happy end to a long week!

 

Alex x

 

Submitted by hudsonmoon on

I am the castle in the air

moated by still, platinum waters 

A favorite lime from you. Truly enjoyed this and congrats for pick of week.

Rich

 

Submitted by alexwritings on

Thanks very much indeed, Rich!