Overgraduate
By queen beatle
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In among the browning pears
and teabags drowned in colonies
of mugs, I make my nest.
Muffling the mordant sun
the kindly hum of giants' music
slows the day's arrest.
Underneath the windowledge
the sea-sore student tribes ascend
those ever-steeper steps
and I remember clambering
in grinning knots towards the top
alone but for the rest.
Self-indulgent, self-obsessed
we co-collided
never co-possessed.
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I have such a vivid picture
I have such a vivid picture of this - those first two verses are so wonderfully descriptive. The rest of the poem speaks of reflection and memory, I imagine a wry smile. This one really struck a chord.
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A very expressive poem with
A very expressive poem with an eye-catching title and interpolated with subtle puns and word play.
Flowing and rhythmic verses and an excellent final stanza. I liked it.
Best, Luigi,
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