Rain Haiku

By moor land

Fri, 11 Jan 2019
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Rain it rains and rains

Mixes smells of leaves and dirt

Earth and plants are one

 

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Comments

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

I liked what you've put together there. Having been out in very soggy January borderland hillsides yesterday! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

So much said in so few words. Beautifully done.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Tom Brown on

Very familiar, for me especially the second line. Very good. It must be hard to write in this the actual correct haiku form you must be a bit restricted.

What is your name? Looking forward to more!

 

Submitted by moor land on

Hi everyone, thanks for your comemnts. I wrote this following a great one day creative writing class where you tried different forms of writing from flash fiction to poetry.

 

Submitted by Nolan on

Yes what a lovely nature poem! It never rains but it pours!

Hope I'm not too late I just discovered this now &&