Night River
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By onemorething
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Electric lights float on the night river;
sailing boats of stars jostle a sway
in the approach of the deeper winter
that will bring its rigor mortis
and a hunt for the wren who beckons
luckless men from the banks.
And what men there have been,
what a collection: some to forgive,
some to be forgiven by, some whose names
I have forgotten. Or blotted out.
This bristle of fluid reflections
gleam upon the ebony water,
I watch them tell their lie
and seem to glide away -
icy and luminous.
The cold mists my breath
and stiffens my remorse, I toss it in,
it tries to swim, but sinks -
a new pebble to taunt the sky -
another stone to rub alongside the submersion
of other abandoned, abortive emotions.
Avenging mummers raise their dead bird
upon a spike, their loud shouts resound
too near in the thin nakedness of the air.
I murmur my Latin to no one, more lost words
escape beneath the gasps from my mouth.
We raise up and we wrench down,
we should wear battle armour
for this kind of treachery of ourselves.
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I love the sound of "jostle a
I love the sound of "jostle a sway", jostle a shut in sort of word and sway wide open, and "tell their lie and seem to glide away" the repetition of "l" sounds and then the drift of "away". They conjure up ripples and movement
And I liked very much the idea of remorse being so cold it sunk like a stone
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Hi onemorething,
Hi onemorething,
I've read this poem many times. It conjured up a picture of someone considering all the men she'd ever known in her life and reflecting on memories of being let down so many times. There's a sadness to reading it, and yet a coming to terms with knowing that we learn by mistakes...especially in those last three lines.
I hope I haven't read your poem wrong, because it is such a captivating poem that your really needs to be read many times.
Jenny.
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