A Good Run
By agnosticnun
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Stuck in this room, body half dead.
My mouth doesn’t work much since the stroke.
Or my hands. So between visits I mostly sit here.
Watching memories like a tv in my head.
That boy was a rough one
Ten wild sons and their sister,
Don’t know how their mum stood it.
Then he grew up and got handsome.
He wore his fedora like a gangster
And me on his arm with my cigarette holder
I was pretty then, could dance all night.
We were something, I’ll tell you.
Nurses come and change my pee pads.
Humiliating is what I call it
Or would if I could,
I was a nurse once too.
Couldn’t work when the girls were small
That was a hard time but we got through
He’d go out shooting, so many rabbits!
Chickens a time or two, I recall.
Well, if they didn’t want us to take their food they should’ve eaten it.
Times settled down and we did too.
Still I loved to dance at the hall
And he played a mean game of pool.
Always drank too much, but that’s men for you.
Then he got the cancer in his liver.
Thought I’d die too, but here I am
Waiting for my daughter to take me to dinner
And talk down to me like a fool.
Hardest thing yet, the way time stretches,
As I sit here like a lump, my dancing all done.
But looking back, I do have to declare
We had ourselves a good run.
Picture is my grandparents. The story is theirs too, though the voice is mine - they were inimitable.
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This is sad but it's
This is sad but it's beautiful too. The words give a real sense of their lives, all that work and the good times and sacrifices too.
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Beautifully done Agnostic -
Beautifully done Agnostic - they certainly sound inimitable
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