Isolation Island 1 - Arrival
By Terrence Oblong
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Classic TO. I love the feel
Classic TO. I love the feel of this.
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I knew a guy
I knew a guy who had blackouts like that once he woke up naked in a bath with a naked guy on top of him passed out only with a bra on. He left discreetly he'd never been there a remote farm. Had no idea what happened. True. Happens. Sometimes.
One does get the impression the story is not finished? It could work for a movie it is original I would say.
Congratulations on those dangling golden cherries! Tom Brown
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Will do
Will do. In my opinion too usually shorter is better. Is it finished now, and submitted? I see this one is updated?
Good luck! Tom
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oh I don't think I read this
oh I don't think I read this one - have read both parts now. Do you remember The Colonel in Dr Who? (I think that's what he was called. A long time ago
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