Signs of Spring 3)

By Rhiannonw

Thu, 26 Mar 2020
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Even in those little tended,
sun shines on the garden flower bursts,
and in the dead wood floors
scattered primroses peep.

 

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Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

The primroses in our garden are so beautiful and keep spreading year by year, we didn't even need to buy any plants, they were probably bought on a breeze.

I liked your poem, it really brings Spring to life.

Jenny.

 

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you, Jenny. I hope you are continuing to feel more better day by day. What a blessing to have this sunshine on our surroundings as we are so restricted! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by fidud on

I love the way, in such a few short lines, you have really captured that juxtaposition between the old, dead, uncared for remnants of winter and the power of the new colourful growth of spring. Masterful! x

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you so much. The beginnigs of colour bursting out again is so noticeable - as long as we take notice! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

I like "little tended"! Flowers like these seem like gifts dropped by the sunshine, I love going round seeing what has come up since the last time. "Peep" is a good word for primross, they do seem shy. And I love the rhythm

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you, Di. I appreciate your noticing and thinking about the detail in what I wrote. Rhiannon