THE SWEET MUSIC OF COLOURS
By Miss Polly
Fri, 24 Apr 2020
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I see the world through your eyes
Colors are golden and bright
I hold the happiness you bring
It feels like I've opened my eyes again
So I pour my heart into your hands
The sun paints the sky
The wind sings our song
My world is a better place
Since you came along
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What lovely sentiments in
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
What lovely sentiments in this poem.
Jenny.
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So nicely, delicately written
Permalink Submitted by rosaliekempthorne on
So nicely, delicately written; not a word out of place. I like "the sun paints the sky". Even the way its set out, with 'since you came along' as its own little stanza, is just perfect.
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