Now the Cars Are Moving.
By Ewan
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Now the cars are moving,
I miss the bird song,
Or is it that I miss
the emboldened birds?
The brash and characterful
villains, who used to strut
outside my window
that faces a huge sycamore
and the block of flats hidden by it.
Raucous Jack Daw,
Thieving Maggie Pie,
Black Jim Crow, of piratical air,
who snatches loaf-heels
from overflowing bins.
Even the pair of starlings
on the old coal house roof
have flown away.
Come back, Peter.
Come back, Paul.
Something regained
is now re-lost,
now the cars are moving.
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Exactly. I'd just about got
Exactly. I'd just about got used to the birdsong on the walk along the main road into town, and now it's gone again. I'd just got used to the air smelling like air and not car exhausts too, and I suppose that will be back to normal soon.
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You summed up the mood
You summed up the mood perfectly in this poem Ewan.
Jenny.
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I like this poem
cars are moving? Boats are moving again too x
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nicely reflective
nicely reflective
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Very clever poem Ewan
It is surprising and comforting in the way nature so quickly re-takes it's space. Reading this reminded me of the time not so long ago when Eyjafjallajökull erupted and we had aircraft free skies for a few days. I recall sitting in the garden and the loudest sounds were the chiff and chaffs from little birds squabbling in the bushes.
A lovely poem
Thank you for some pleasnat memories.
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Excellent, liked 'brash and
Excellent, liked 'brash and characterful villains ' and 'of piratical air'. Like the way you're imaginative with words, take a shot at things, it gives your work a unique style
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