Petra Ichor's oil slick

By littleditty

Thu, 11 Jun 2020
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shit fan fan shit *duck*

 

water flows under the bridge

 

petrichor's oil slick
 

 

 

 

https://theconversation.com/the-smell-of-rain-how-csiro-invented-a-new-word-39231#:~:text=The%20word%20is%20%E2%80%9Cpetrichor%E2%80%9D%2C,before%20rain%20begins%20to%20fall.

Certificate U
Poem
haiku
Rant

Comments

Submitted by Ed Crane on

 

 

Submitted by littleditty on

To such a great word. But I've apologised to the word, and will use the idea of it to write to my hearts content. Few dyays holiday for me. Its been brutal. Thanks Ed Crane.

 

Submitted by Ed Crane on

They should make an aftershave of it.

I don't see any insults to the form here.

I've seen far far worse!!!! (especially of so-called Haiku websites:)))

 

Submitted by littleditty on

come from?! There's been wafts! This is a wafty pooh sticks bridge poem with some deep deep de.deep - and its funny! Its a bit slick but i have the days off to write the less slick nick one. Im a bit cheeky with haiku. Thanks.

 

Submitted by Ed Crane on

For me I made my own interpetation of this based on moi which is why I thought haiku/senyru (I'm no expert of course) I suppose think I kinda wish I'd written it.

 

Submitted by littleditty on

I am definitely not an expert...the maths questions to post comments have been getting more difficult recently so I dont expect to learn much more about weeny japanese poems until I have had more rest! Cheers Ed. 

 

Submitted by Ed Crane on

(Lays down in a darkened room)