Dama de Noite

By littleditty

Mon, 22 Jun 2020
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Lite night no moon

An arresting reverie

White flowers blooming

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ed06/20

Certificate U
Poem
haiku
Nature

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Submitted by Parson Thru on

I really love the moment you capture here, littleditty. My only question is whether a reverie would arrest. What do you think?

Parson Thru

Submitted by littleditty on

and this is adapted from a smellier darker haiku - this is an updated Lite version, and I was moored by a jasmine tree these last two weeks. So to answer your question: arresting as in stopped in awe or wonder at sense? 

 

Submitted by Parson Thru on

Moored is arrested alright. Have you travelled the Leeds Liverpool?

Parson Thru

Submitted by littleditty on

 

 

Submitted by Parson Thru on

Did the jasmine tree arrest your progress?

Parson Thru

Submitted by littleditty on

blooming arresting and some arresting hapennings blooming right there when I discovered a old stray haiku and made it much nicer now thank you very much indeed type - arrested development haiku #2. i think