rainy sweet sleep

By Nolan

Mon, 12 Oct 2020
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8 comments
 

friendly tip-tapping your window
hear far the rumble calls the wind
heavy drops drumming the roof
little streams running icy cold
misty paradise of the wet garden

warm blankets soft pillows home
blessed happy smiles happy eyes
laughing joy kisses sweet delight
little darling cuddle-snuggle safe
bed dry and soft and warm

Certificate U
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raining goodnights
Love

Comments

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

It feels all warm and cozy in your poem Nolan. A heart warming place to be.

Jenny.

 

 

Submitted by Nolan on

Yes Jenny, romantic too? & hoped to make it so to work the same for either a daughter or a wife,  but I guess the girl won!

Keep well Jenny & see you! Nolan

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Captures the delight you mention when the rain comes. As a child I remember the feeling cosy in bed when one could hear the rain drumming outside, – still do! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

"hear far the rumble calls the wind" this is wonderful!

"misty paradise of the wet garden" magic :0)

beautiful contrast to your second part

 

Submitted by Nolan on

Goodnight! &

 

Submitted by Nolan on

goodnight my angel! listen to the rain listen to it fall, listen to the wind listen to the storm. Your father is strong and your mother loves you, little darling safe and warm without a care sleep tight!

~ & && ~

 

Submitted by Nolan on

Sleep tight darling listen to the rain, hear it fall

Goodnight mmx!

 

Submitted by Nolan on

let me wrap my rhyme around you oh let me wrap my rhyme freely wrap my dreams around you and around and darling around you let me wrap my words let me wrap my dreams tender around you let me wrap my dreams tightly tightly darling let me whirl a ring of rhythm darling around you