The Evening Sky Lost

Cherry

By Richard L. Provencher

Mon, 04 Jan 2021
  • 1244 reads
8 comments
 

its reverential flavour as

the storm swept in

from Halifax already

covered in sleet ice and

eventually snow

now raging towards Truro

part of the sweep

all across Nova Scotia.

 

When it arrived

everyone agreed it

was as bad as Newscasters

predicted all day except twice

as bad as anyone thought,

 

He had to clear

a blanket of white from his

car windows

a flotsam of crystals

that descended an hour ago.

The snow plow cleared

the driving lane from

the seniors apartment and now  

their turn

to clear personal spaces.  

 

A second wave of disruption

awaited just licking away at the 

crescent of Cobequid Hills

on the outskirts of Truro–

a coalition of sleet rain

and snow preparing to flush out

the fearful and converge upon

every niche holding out

in hiding places.

( 1st Truro NS winter storm Jan 2-3/2021)

 

 

Certificate U
Poem
Enter the Meadow
Nature

Comments

Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on

 

Richard L. Provencher

Submitted by Penny4athought on

Loved the flow of words and the wintry images- Sounds like time for a snowball fight- build the fort and break out the sled...SNOW DAY! Oh how I miss that crisp cold pristine blanket of beauty - living here in Florida my snow is melted buckets of rain when storms move through- so build a snowman and seize the day for me!  smiley

Penny4athought

Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on

What a lovely comment on my poem. I sincerely wish you our Lord Jesus' protection and a wonderful time in the land of the warm. Happy New Year! 

Richard L. Provencher

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

My youmg gramdchildren (1 and 3) were so excited Saturday night at a slight covering, and their exctied parents took them out in the dark yard to gather snowballs (!) and feel it, as , as expected it had more or less cleared by morning. They'd watched a flurrying of flakes from the door earlier, - their first experiece, and the older went out in the afternoon with her mother to feel chunks of ice from frozen puddles., so they still await their first real experience of snow. I think the older did see some briefly last year when they lived in London, but that is a vague memory! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on

Thank you, RhiannonW for your kind comments. I have always loved winter even though at the young age of 78.6 my bones now feel a chill.

Richard L. Provencher

Submitted by marandina on

Think you captured the weather just nicely. Snow forecast in Northants tomorrow - at last!

 

Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on

Blessings on you, lovely M - trying to capture what is so natural is such a joyous challenge, eh? On day I hope to have a commercial published a hard cover poetry book.

Richard L. Provencher

Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on

To the kind ABC editors - Mercie pour les cerises. -R

Richard L. Provencher