Wedding Days

By mcscraic

Sat, 06 Mar 2021
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Wedding Days

By Paul McCann

On wedding days we say for better or for worse .

In others words you always put the other first  .

For richer or poorer, throw away that old purse

Look after each other , be the doctor , the nurse ,

the lover who would give until the heart would burst ,

A married woman is the Queen of love that’s brings        .

happiness to the home and in everything .

Marriage is what makes a man feel like he’s a  King

A future together is no throw away thing ,

Eternal is the symbol of a wedding ring   .

Wedding days are those forever days that we share.

They are one of life’s special moments that are rare.

Exchanging vows are just like a heavenly prayer,

Spoken straight from the heart and soul to remember

to cherish and to love and to always be there .

 
 

 

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Submitted by Slater on

Nice job. I liked the rhym scheme quite a bit- almost gave it a hymnal feel (is that word hymnal?) like at a wedding. Anyway, I could be wrong but is the line exchanging vows are like a heavenly prayer a typo (it feels like it should be is instead of are). I guess it depends on whether you mean for the vows to be "exchanging vows" (ie. exchanging is descibing a motion of the vows being exchanged) or like the action of you and your wife exchanging vows (in which case you would want are to become is because you're describing a single action). Either way, I think you did a good job overall. Especially, by juxtaposing the past with the present to show the perpetuity of love and marriage. 

 

Submitted by mcscraic on

Nice to hear from you and yes the reference was for both people exchanging vowx

so are instead of is was used .

I really appreciate you taking the time to read

and making the time to merits a comment .

All the very best .

Paul