Good Friday Stroll, 02/04

Cherry

By Rhiannonw

Fri, 09 Apr 2021
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Sparkling celandines
and deep-hued violets
shining in the sunshine
amidst the new rich green ground cover.
Hawthorn leaves squirting out of buds,
daffodils still in full song,
and a celandine growing in a split trunk niche.

Certificate U
Poem
Countryside explorations
Nature

Comments

Submitted by marandina on

A concise, vivid stroll full of the colours of spring. Nicely done, Rhiannon.

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you. It was a very special stroll, as I have been rather confined, and the sunshine on the flowers was glorious. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Rhiannon,

I'm so happy to hear you're finally managing to get out, if only for a stroll. I understand and do feel for you. You've captured a lovely bit of colourful nature here in your poem, which I always love to read.

Beautiful and thank you for sharing.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you, Jenny! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Ewan on

good Friday.

Delightful.

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Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks, Ewan. Glad you found it so! A good Friday in both aspects. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by hilary west on

A lovely little gem, Rhiannon, so short but so full of beauty !

Hilary   angel

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you, HIlary. I appreciate your comment. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by jeand on

Hi Rhiannon

 

Beautifully written, and such a lovely walk you must have had. Your poem is full of hope.

Jean Day

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you, Jean. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

Rich with your way of seeing, how you conjure the majesty and marvel of life in so few lines. I am really glad you got out into the sunshine and the wild, Rhiannon. It is like seeing a butterfly open its wings reading this :0)

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank yoy. Lovely,thoughtful comment, Di. Rhiannon