Storm clouds rolling in
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By Penny4athought
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Cold front coming in
Disturbance in the upper atmosphere
Shivers expected
Electrical flashes
Dangerous lightning
Rumbles of thunder over the home front
Take cover in safe spaces
Verbal volleys imminent
Friction in closed quarters looming
Storms calm when tempers drop
Sunshine dissipates frustration
Understanding, seeable on the horizon
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I like the intertwining of
I like the intertwining of emotions with the weather. Adeptly done :)
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The comma after understanding
The comma after understanding is like a deep breath of relief :0) You convey the tension of the atmosphere before very well
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Similar poem
Hey..I've just posted a poem about Rain Clouds and then saw yours. Yours is great and more atmospheric x
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I also was impressed by the
I also was impressed by the way the subjects merged! Rhiannon
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You captured the weather
You captured the weather perfectly in this poem Penny.
Jenny.
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The parallel between
The parallel between meteorological and emotional turbulences is expertly expressed JoAnne.
Luigi x
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