LAND, SKY AND THE RED MOON
By Yutka
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Land went asleep, her hills and valleys lit
by early twilight moon. Her misty breath
rose with owl’s call into the shape of clouds
that raised Sky’s passion growing by the minute.
Did he cry out and sigh when falling hard
and heavily onto her naked hills? He moaned
when entering her seas, with lover’s skill
he touched her cities, stroked her moonlit backyards.
With gentleness he covered all her shapes
hiding them with his precious coat of stars.
Deeply they slept, two lovers there abreast,
yet Land dreamt haunting dreams of lust and rapes.
Soon Land stretched out writhing in agony,
her valleys bent in pain, contracting rivers
swelled into pallid seas, her silent tears
brought down the sky onto his heavenly knee.
From the horizon Sky plucked the red moon
to lend a midwife’s hand by raising Hope.
The moon on his ascent wiped blood away,
on his descent brought Land and Sky in tune.
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conception and birth
Lovely. Beautiful. Although I do think you should give a stricter age restriction. The pattern of stanzas is rather unusual but I think I can make sense of it, It is has to do with a birth I think.
This is really very good. Reminds of Dylan Thomas- that more so in the content.
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stanzas and that
Write the (five?) stanzas in ordinary text without line spaces inside and post like that. Just the five blocks like that. Works for me. Always try to post in ordinary text. If that is what you mean .. . .. and the age rating looks better!
Thanks for the notes on your poem they're helpful. Great poem!
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