giving ground
By Di_Hard
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we surprised each other, far in leaf-locked woods,
layered tree tops tent-poling a pale cloud roof
in mizzle-tingling new made air, as birdsong
stitched us together in stillness, till the hedgehog's curve
unpaused - my tree impression given benefit of the doubt -
to head off, carefully placing one paw at a time,
as if concentrating on each cool tickle of tall grass tines
poking through a fleecy moss, as well as relishing
catch of smells with twitches of black, shiny nose
in always-hunt for brown, sleeking muscles of a slug
and I walked on my path unwinding, thought : those
who build ships to go into space feel more alien to me
than birds must, to hedgehogs - no matter what we do, this
planet holds better hope for life than all others that we know.
Why reject our unique, miraculous Earth - because it's free?
What's heroic about not paying taxes so you can burn
resources, instead of helping feed people, cure pandemics
stop exctinctions, wars, despair? These modern king Midases
choose a glittering infinity, unbreathable, undrinkable, fame,
while elf-elegant rowans shed white petals as if largesse of stars
on dark soil and swirls of willow-down waft, collect in drifts,
so under foot's a Milky Way, but warm, soft and full
of promises for growth; huge rhododendrons flower
like constellations of glowing purple globes, and all around
Green aspires, competing, sharing, giving breath, making
me believe all mistakes can be forgiven, if there are woods
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this is so vivid - meeting
this is so vivid - meeting the hedgehog, and then your train of thought afterwards
a couple of things:
Green aspiris - not sure what this is?
one pay at a time - paw?
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I love how you weave a spell
I love how you weave a spell of how beautiful our planet earth is, and how we should respect and give thanks for all its nature.
A poem I will come back to many times.
Thank you for sharing Di.
Jenny.
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Wonderful poem. So much great
Wonderful poem. So much great imagery.
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Lovely description of your
Lovely description of your walk in the woods, plants and watched hedgehog. Encouraging others to note such detail and appreciate at this time of year. As you say such a wonderful home we've been given, we admire the power and lights around the universe, but the comfort we've been given here and the delicate beauty and provision is wonderful. Rhiannon
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"..mizzle-tingling new made
"..mizzle-tingling new made air.." A very creative, expertly assembled piece of work. Just super, Di.
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compact and the metaphors are very challenging
Compact and the metaphors are very challenging. What does the snail riding on the tortoise say? EeeeeeeeeeyyyA !!
Sorry I see I think I made a mistake I thought it was about snails.
Keep well Di, Goodnight! Tom Brown
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