Entitlement
By Richard L. Provencher
Thu, 24 Mar 2022
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Your eyes open
my thoughts
as I prepare a kiss to
share with you-
such a wholesome
moment.
You surround me
with memories
that recollect the first
time I saw you now
behind us
& our love values
grew forever
into this
very special space.
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Very special and thoughtful.
Very special and thoughtful. And clever condensed thoughts to work out eg
'Your eyes open my thoughts' and 'the first time I saw you now behind us'
Rhiannon
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Such tender sentiments told
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Such tender sentiments told so comfortably in this poem Richard.
Jenny.
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