Ole Cap'n Pete
By Lee Heights
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If I were to meet someone who thought of me
how I thought of Ole Cap’n Pete,
surely I’d never leave.
But he left us, left us in a tree.
Believe me.
He was a real good guy, Cap’n Pete.
A christian man who really believed.
I’m sure he went to church once or twice a week
when he worked on the Tallahassee.
An unforgettable guy, Ole Cap’n Pete.
One of those guys who ya’ get to see
every now and then in one of ya’ dreams.
Of course if ya’ were like me,
and wished he’d never o’ leaved.
We, the whole crew and me,
were out on our vessel in the middle o’ sea,
and they told me that Cap’n Pete
was just gonna start goin’ with the breeze.
But I was sure of where he was to be,
when I saw them load him in that boxed tree
and toss him out to the rolling sea.
Oh, I’ll miss Ole Cap’n Pete,
but surely, I’ll never leave like he.
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Lee - I think your poem is
Lee - I think your poem is best suited to the ballad form. This usually consists of four-line stanzas with a rhyme scheme of ABCB, although other variations exist. A distinctive meter is also important, usually combining four and three stresses on the line; but, again, the poet has a certain amount of leeway.
A very useful book about form in poetry is The Making of a Poem : A Norton Anthology of Poetic Forms by Mark Strand & Eavan Boland.
Hope this helps.
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