"little, half moon" -tanka

Cherry

By T. Imaan Tretchicovmanicova

Fri, 10 Jun 2022
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the little, half moon
rises in the eastern sky;
a splendid sight to
behold, surrounded by blue
sky, a silent example.

 

©'t. imaan tretchicovmanicova 
10jun22

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Submitted by Tom Brown on

Yes splendid but the big red harvest moon is too, actually because of illusion, as refraction of sunlight by the atmoshere.

Could be thst the days on average is a bit longer than nights? The cow jumped over the moon etc.

Cheers! Tim Brown

 

Submitted by T. Imaan Tretch... on

Thank you, Tom Brown, for your lovely feedback to my work.