The Witch’s Daughter
By onemorething
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South Utsire, southerly or southwesterly 4 to 6,
becoming variable, occasional rain, fog patches.
You can't drown him, mother said,
he was born under the Dog Star, rising,
his caul wrapped tight around his head.
Still, I whistled my bad fortune
from the shore; for somewhere
I am a wreck, a dark harbour for serpents,
swilled and sand-blown, barnacled, but
with the bones of a memory of land,
of the sure-footed.
Lundy, Fastnet, Northeast 3 to 5, moderate in the southwest,
but elsewhere smooth or slight. Fair. Good.
I went to sea in a cockleshell,
it being a Wednesday, my broom for an oar,
I had a mind to find him, with tricks
of glittering scales, the ocean, a thousand
cormorants deep. A selkie, soft-slipped, shiny
as a black pearl, beneath an ithe, returned
to the strangeness -- the abyssal of fangtooth
and wolffish, beneath a squall, its sea spell and
the flickering green lanterns below.
Hebrides, Bailey, Fair Isle, Faeroes, southwest 5 to 7,
becoming cyclonic later, rain or showers.
Kelp-haired, fists of brine, I sought him,
over the shapes of monsters, the shadows
of half-dreams, across leagues of ogin,
a great swell, the dangers of unbroken eggshell,
me, a witch's daughter, and him, with his knots
that he knew from palomar to bimini twist;
we knew each other well once, I think, but
this how we sail now, fitful and alone,
adrift upon the mysteries of sleep.
Image is from here: https://artvee.com/dl/the-witchs-daughter/
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I like the weather forecast
I like the weather forecast interludes and the folklore aspect of the story. You do this style of poem so well. Dark, foreboding, magical..
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So good.
so very, very good.
Best to you
Lena x
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Hi Rachel,
An unusual poem that is most mysterious and curious. It makes me think of a symbolic diary entry known only to the Witch herself.
I love the picture too.
Jenny.
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This is wonderful and I don't
This is wonderful and I don't know how I missed it before now (probably heat related). I love the interspering of the Shipping Forecast too. A beautiful, multi layered poem, well done one!
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It just rained here today for
It just rained here today for 20 minutes and is now a bit cooler. Unfortunately it coincided with some very unsympathetic farmer doing a bit of muckspreading so the lovely smell of rain on a hot day is now rain on a hot day with manure. Not so pleasant!
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This wonderful poem is our
This wonderful poem is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day!
Please share/retweet if you enjoy it as much as I did
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the weather forecast was a
the weather forecast was a book, but I prefer you poem.
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I listen to the shipping
I listen to the shipping forecast most nights before I go to sleep, I even have my favourite announcers! It will be even more magical for me now, after reading this. Beautiful poem.
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