In These Small Things

By lenchenelf

Thu, 04 Aug 2005
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2 comments
 

Look, it's back;

first winter snowfall,
grey-white grizzle,
absent minded flakes
drifting here and there.
Scant damp dandruff
settles on shoulders
of a tired world
and testing year.

Mush slush puddles
for us to jump in,

if

we dare.

Lovely

Certificate U
Story
Childrens Poems
Children's

Comments

Submitted by TJW on

Absent minded flakes, that's great.  Settles on the shoulders of a tired world, makes me conjure Atlas in my mind, the dandruff settling on his shoulders. Much obliged.

 

V/R 

TJ

 

Submitted by lenchenelf on

for your kind reading. 

Best regards

Lena x