Let the Blue through!

Cherry

By Rhiannonw

Mon, 30 Jan 2023
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13 comments
 

Blue light flashes
Woo-woo! Woo-woo! Woo-woo!
fire engine trundles by,
red with yellow splashes,
soon their hoses drenching
flames and fire quenching.

Blue lights once more flashing by
Woo-woo! Woo-woo! Woo-woo!
An ambulance is dashing by:
yellow van with stripes
of green and yellow zooming past,
off to hospital safely, fast

Again see blue lights flash,
Woo-woo! Woo-woo! Woo-woo!
but why
are they also whizzing by?
white with stripes of yellow and blue –
let the police car quickly through
to the danger, crime or crash
to make things safe for me and you.

[IP: Blue]

Certificate U
Poem
For children
Children's
Inspiration Point (work that responds to our weekly writing cue)

Comments

Submitted by marandina on

Nicely done, educational and sound affects included. I enjoyed reading this, Rhiannon. Paul :) 

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks! Bit of fun getting out, trying to keep clear and crisp. I gather some children at a primary school when the police were there were asking them whether the sound was 'nee-naw' or 'woo-woo' I think, and the police apologised to neighbours for sounding the sirens rather often as the debate continued, and in the end the children voted and I think 'woo-woo' won by a slight amount! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Jane Hyphen on

Perfect for young children, just the right length and some repetition. Can you draw, Rhiannon? I honestly think you could publish this with illustrations.

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks, Jane. That means a lot. I can't draw, but love messing around with clipart that you can take apart and change! So, if these were published I think an artist would have to be involved! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

This is lovely Rhiannon, and i agree with Jane. Maybe you could find a child to do the illustrations? It would be a lovely project for someone and would suit the age range

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you, that's a really nice idea and comment. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you for the cherries. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

You are building quite a collection of entertaining and educational poems for children. The young ones in your family must be delighted. Well done.

Luigi x

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks, Luigi. I do like being child-like and having fun at their level! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Tom Brown on

Especially with the sirens and lights! I want to be a fireman when I grow up.

Loved it! See you Rhiannon! Tom

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

You too are still enjoying youthful enthusiasms! Thank you, Tom. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by forest_for_ever on

Lovely rhythm Rhiannon.  I always say a silent prayer when the blue flashing light goes by. They are never going to a celebration.

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks. Yes, I remember someone who worked in one of the emergency services reminding us we should do so, for those in trouble, but also for those going to try to help and possibly having to deal with situations hard to help and very upsetting. Rhiannon